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Locked for saying that, wow. Well Nate I did see the X but it's only there for response or review posts, it was there for one written work, but not ...

How do you change your username or edit it? And why can you not delete a post on here? Especailly b/c this is only a little forum. We are not ...

"Takes longer than safe to realise what’s happening." --Takes longer than safe? "I begin to become aware again." --beginning and becoming? I'd re-word that those two words are kinda redudant. ...

This poem reminded me of that teacher in Billy Madison, the one who smears glue all over her face. I have to agree with Xena this seemed very constrained and ...

Cool. You probably get a lot of experiences from The Navy for your writing. Welcome.

I really like your use of time of day in both your series of photos: a)The ones of the electrical tower and b)The ones of the sun. I thought your ...

It's even harder to write today b/c of all the extraneous sources there are. I mean, I'm a huge NBA fan and I can get every single game for just ...

I like the use of the repetition. I wouldn't recommend using it constantly in your various other poems, but for 1 or 2 poems, or a little more in a ...

First attempt. Nice job. Can't say much about the paints and colors and all that, but I have seen a lot of paintings and if this is your first attempt ...

I figured, I am already higher than most planes, seeing the sky because all it is is my world, for I have known nothing else. But someone offered me some ...

"Anything he could do that would be new, unexplored, adventurous." -- Wasn't too sure if this should've been a separate sentence from the one that before it. It read awkwardly ...

Hey hope you post a lot

I hold passion in my hand. I am what they cannot understand. The way I see the world is beautiful, Not coloured in the lines imagined on my land. This ...

This was great! I think sarcasm is something you're born with and that it isn't brought out in one until one reaches middle school!

Dream Deep, All The Kings Men, that was a great book. Anyone interested in politics should check that out.